genuine-writer

I really liked the way you made the poem so that it was like a story. You told it from beginning to end and a lot of the things were ...

I think that when you read the poem, its a little to chopped up. Like you put to many commas where you don't need them. when you wrote this: "And ...

i love the poem. i love the way you made it so that the reader could imagine but couldn't quite grasp the actual meaning unless you were the author. thats ...

i think that you really tried to make it kind of mysterious right? almost like people thought that you were the killer and you wanted to deny them because it ...