gema11

First of all, you should explain what code switching is early on in your essay. You do not need to explain it in the introduction, but include it in the ...

Hello! This is my first poetry review, so bear with be. :) I like the message that you are trying to send with this- the internal anguish. It gets rather ...

This is definitely an engaging story, but I do have some suggestions and such. The first thing I have to say is the "great rule' of writers- show, don't tell. ...

Wow, I really like enjoyed this piece- your writing is amazing. :) The tone is very good, and consistent through the whole piece. Okay, now for some edits/suggestions. Watch out ...

I like what you are trying to say with this piece, but the style you are writing it in is a little off-putting. It seems that you might be trying ...

This is very promising. A few suggestions- Try and use my and I less- I know it can be hard when writing in first person, but try to not start ...

I really like your idea for the ending, but I agree it needs to be expanded. Some suggestions- make Myra's inner turmoil more turmoil-y. I think she does not feel ...

I do like this, but it needs some work. Myra seems very brainwashed, which I assume is your intention, but I think her hints of dissension should be a bit ...