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Hey! I'm Amna and I'm excited to be reviewing this post! Derek could feel himself getting stronger as his mouth filled with the delicious taste of blood from the weak ...

HI! I'm Amna and I'm excited to read this! I hope my notes are useful :) Willa curled up in the hospital bed, facing the wall. The last of her ...

These are just my opinions! Do with them as you please. “You’re going out?” He tried his best to remain calm as I shrugged on my coat. “In this kind ...

I never thought I’d love my grandmother as much as I did now. Staring at her half open eyes, unfocused and hollow, I felt guilt. Guilt for not helping her ...

This was well written! Only thing I would point out is the amount of adverbs you use. When you use the adverb, your telling not showing. Don't worry, I do ...

Well done, I think this was well written. You tell me a lot of things, but I would prefer it if you just showed me! I think you have the ...

Hi! Please take my critique with a pinch of salt :) It is only my opinion! Wrapping her shawl around her slender shoulders, Liana shivered in the chilly beginning of ...

Hiya :) These are just my opinions, so do with them as you please! 1. This is very well written. Your descriptions are captivating and I feel like the story ...

Hiya :) These are just my opinions, so you can completely ignore me! 1. I actually thought your MC age was between 15-19. I figured she might be 17 because ...

Hiya :) I enjoyed reading this, it was well written and i can imagine your characters easily. Only think you may want to describe more is the setting. I get ...

This is very well written and I do find myself wanting to read more. You have a good storyline- very gripping. Only nitpick is probably to make some of your ...

I think your MC has a very good voice so well done. The dialogue start caught my attention straight away, but near the end I actually didn't like your MC. ...

I'm not a real big fan of the prologue, the first few paragraphs were difficult to read because of your sentence structure. There are times when your sentences drag on ...