gazdemon

It was nice, but very short...I felt you could have done more with an entire season and been more unique. Your rhymes were nice, but nothing special...perhaps you could try ...

The poem was one of your best. I loved the imagery and how the rhymes worked together. maybe it should be 'awash' instead of 'a wash', thats the only crit. ...

Above the town, The sky is split lovely use of form here, spacing the lines out - decentring the reader. And tugged from east to west by clouds. Tiny black ...

That was great to read, it is great that you have such a high regard for a teacher that you took the time to write this. Mr. B must mean ...

It is good, but I had a few qualms with it. In the beginning you tell us how the students feel, etc. but instead it makes it more interesting for ...

Icaruss is right, he made me laugh so much. You need to consider things more carefully. You won't get sympathy by making up a 'poem' on the spot...you need to ...

I enjoyed your poem, it was very relaxing and your choice of words really lent themselves to the style of a lullaby. The only little problem I had was in ...