gamechanger10

Haha. All I can think about is how I read Messenger first and was just like, "Huh?" the whole time. And I thought it was the dumbest book ever because ...

The punctuation has pretty much been taken care of (though that's no where near my strongest area anyway). Anyhow, this was a good piece. It had a nice flow and ...

Don't make fun of Obama! haha. Kidding. Anyhow, this was okay, some of the lines such as "a black pit" were sort of off, but for the most part, it ...

I'm not sure why, but this just didn't pop out to me. :? It had several areas that were sort of...awkward in wording, etc. And for such a short piece, ...

When I read the title of this, I immediately thought of the song "I Kissed a Girl" by Katy Perry. It was number one on iTunes for a while. Anyway, ...

I'm sorry. Truly, deeply sorry for what you went through. However, this was a deep, beautiful, moving piece full of emotion. If it was horrible, I wouldn't be posting this ...

This was a really deep poem, and has potential to be great. Everybody already covered the grammatical things, etc. I agree with spike that you should add some imagery to ...

I really liked this. It was happy...then sad... Very emotional. The only thing I have to point out is that in the last pair of rhymes, sulking and darling ...aren't ...

This was good for it's length. I agree with Suzanne that maybe you should subtly add in an underlying message or something... Anyway, this had great imagery despite not having ...

I really, really liked this poem! I don't know if it's the contradictions in each stanza, the overall flow of the poem, the whole piece, or the fact that I'm ...

this was a pretty good poem. nice work. just a few the first stanza, gone/wrong is sort of a stretched rhyme. Perhaps change that. I really liked the last stanza, ...

This was great! Frightening, but great! Most of the punctuation, etc. was already pointed out. Blink said that the ending was 'very weak'. I think that it was only a ...

this was very...interesting. the beginning intregued me...but then toward the end I was just like, "What?" it is extremely abstract, as I'm sure you intended for it to be. it ...

ok, lea, this was only slightly better than your other one. a few of the lines (eg. even stuck in a hut) seem like you were just trying a bit ...

this poem was interesting. it had a good concept, was powerfully dramatic...and just great. the questions you asked kept me reading at a convincibly fast pace. i too, however noticed, ...