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I just smiled through that entire story. No joke :) I need more more more more more more more MORE CHILD!!!!!!! that was a great warm fuzzy story!

Hey there! So I really really love this story a ton! There are a few grammatical errors, though. For one, I think you were trying to say wiped, not whipped. ...

This story is.....perfect. I can't find anything to review! Your descriptions are amazing and I felt like I was looking at a picture. I think this story needs to be ...

This prologue has me interested! I do feel, however, that you need to give a little more emotion. Shouldn't I feel sorry for the victim? Or maybe triumphant for the ...

hey there! There is just something about a dialogue that is always intriguing. I think if you would have written this in any other form it would have been less ...

Hello there! So....uuhmm....I am pretty sure that Rosalie said basically all there is to say. haha The story was an adorable read. I love these kinds of stories that make ...

Hello there! So for starters, I like the fact that I don't know what went on before hand. It gives the seen a little mystery which can be very good. ...

Hey there! So I am pretty much a sucker for these kinds of stories! I love your idea! The characters are good and the end is cute. BUT! i think ...

It's so nice to see a happy little story every once in a while! :D This story was very well written, too! It got a little boring in the middle ...

Hello there! So I love your idea. With some much vampire vs. werewolf stuff going around, it's nice to see one where a person can be a mix. The way ...

All I can say is....i want more! The story had a great plot and It kept me reading. There were a few editing mistakes and just somethings I remember is ...

I love love love love your idea here. I think there needs to be more detail, though. Do you think you could explain the game just a little bit more? ...