funkyreg101

Ahahahaha Loved it! That was really good!

Thanks for the help everyone! I'm editing the first chapter a bit more and then I'll post another chapter as soon as I have enough points. In the meantime, care ...

^^Thank's a lot! I kinda realized it's similar to the Hunger Games, but i'll try to lean away from it as much as possible. I'll go through and fix those ...

The names are made up by Sami, and the Indiana Jones is a machine that shoots out arrows from the wall when you step on a pressure point, which is ...

Thank you! This was just kind of a random idea that popped into my head, so I wrote out a prologue... I'm not entirely sure where this is going yet, ...

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Hi! I'm Regan, your reviewer for this story. I put things I like in blue, things you shoulod change in red, and their corrections in green. This story was taken ...

Oh hahaha my bad! Typo... lol

thanks! She was dreaming, but her dream took what had really happened and replayed it... I guess... Idk how to explain it lol but she was really dreaming,

hmmm... I thought I did an okay job describing the senses, I dont have taste or smell, but sight feeling and hearing are pretty much covered in there! As for ...

Hi! I'm Regan, your reviewer for this peice. The way I do this is I highlight the thing that is wrong or needs editing in RED and the correction/what it ...

Thanks! I try to remember to write it Arial every time, but its hard to remember hahaha I'll go through and fix that!

This was soooo funny! I nearly peed myself laughing!!! *LIKE*!!!

Awww! This is sooooo adorable!!! I love that it doesn't explain whats going on until the end. I was so lost by why it was in italics, I got that ...

Thanks! I copy and paste from microsoft word, and YWS gets rid of the space between the paragraphs.