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Hi I'm Regan! I'll be reviewing your peice! "Amiria!” Someone shouted in the distance. I sighed, why couldn't I be alone for more than a few minutes? I mean seriously! ...

First I must say one thing, I have bad speling, please help. I have a very high vocabulary. So if you find something spelled wrong, sorry. Assassin Prologue The mysterious ...

Hi! Is this going to be part of a novel? If so, you should move it to action adventure novels. It seems more like a fantasy though... with nine year ...

Hey! I'm going to get a lot more nit picky then the others. I do agree though, it was really good. I loved the intensity. Let's start! I strained my ...

I'm begining to feel obliged to tell you that this is your sixth chapter, but you don't have any comments on your fifth, which you posted before you had any ...

Hi! Regan here! I'm going to review your post. I put things that are wrong in red, there corrections in green, things i like in blue and punctuation/words that should ...

Hi! I'm Regan, your reviewer for this story. I put things I like in blue, things you shoulod change in red, and their corrections in green. This story was taken ...

Hi! I'm Regan, your reviewer for this peice. The way I do this is I highlight the thing that is wrong or needs editing in RED and the correction/what it ...

I really like this, it's really unique and interesting. I love the concept and where your going with it! A few things that bugged me though, previous posts covered most ...

I really think it was great. There was a lot of emotion behind it, despite it's shortness. You used great description and had a strong voice. I would like there ...

HI! I'm Regan. This remindes me A LOT like a mix between twilight and city of bones. Hm. Well I dont know how the rest will play out, so it ...

Hi! I'm Regan, I'll review your peice! Nothing. The only other differences was this large metallic cube sitting in the middle of my apartment floor. Okay, this confused me. At ...

R3G@N Here! Corrections in red Things I like in Green *For Skins contest* Title should be: I Never Liked My Name I never liked my name. What kid wants to ...

Hmmm okay. So i could hardly get past the first paragraph. The gramatical errors are everywhere!!!!! Here we go... I will make corrections in red. Ive been working on this ...

hi! this is a excerpt from my work in progress, well, no, more like a work in idle, but you get the idea. (names are not decided yet) Swallowing a ...