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Re: Goodbye
Great work, I'm sure your teacher will love it! I definitly do! Very touching, which makes poems like this one very succesfull! I enjoyed it. Keep Writing! Panda X
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me
Fairytale! It's amazing how everyone loves a happy ending, and of course so do I! So cute I could die! I notcied 'teh' spelling mistake and it ended a bit ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Shout it to the World.
Wow - that made me LOL when I read it! Really good, intresting work that made me want to keep reading. Keep Writing, and you WILL be a star! funkypanda ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Missing Link Prologue and Chapter one
This is great, I wanna read some more now - it really hooked me. I like theese kind of real life stories. Keep Writing and I'll Keep Reading! funkypanda X
May 4, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
Keep writing songs this was AWESOME! X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Love is Kind?
I can honestly say this is very moving. The message is very important and it was very emotional. It was amazing. X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Walls
This poem is so capturing i couldn't stop reading. it has a real story to it and it flowed really well. nothing else to say.
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Do you know her?
Heres a tip - when you finish it, don't explain everything. It would give the reader a sort of, oh... As in, that didn't leave the mysterious impression it could ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Pirate Stove
Nice description! I really felt this piece and the word choice was great. As others have mentioned, a story or message of some sort would be amazing. Really good work ...
Mar 28, 2011