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hey luccy!! hope you aren't angry for delaying so much!! Really really sorry.. well...you might find my review completely worthless but I guess you don't even need it anymore anyways ...

Hi! I am genuinely sorry I took so long for you review. Anyways, here we go! In your writing style, I do not have any problems. It’s still like in ...

Hey, this was quite interesting.. It was expressive and sad..... I can't help you much on the poem, but I can tell you one thing.. Don’t call me I can’t ...

Hii grace... Okay, so I can't help you out with the punctuations, because I stink at it myself! Possessive is a great word That's just how I describe you "great" ...

hii chichi! Welcome to YWS! hope you like it here.. Now for your piece.. Hmm....Interesting story! Although you could use bit more descriptions. for eg. I dance and sing and ...

Hii! and welcome to YWS! As for your story, I was thouroughly interested from the time I read the first line. I do not have much to say. All the ...

Hii Alexis!!! Great piece of work... Just a bit too quick...Things need to be described better. Its like, one minute they meet...the next, they are in love. Describe the feelings, ...

It was good! but a bit too short, I'll say.. It keeps the reader waiting. What happens after she chooses a glass?? We want to know more! But all in ...

Sorry, but this poem seems very very forced!! It wasn't that bad, but you reall really have to work on you rythm. Some lines were good, though, like this one. ...

Hii there!! I do not have much toay here. I liked your story...a lot! It took an unexpected twist and I love twists! I'd just like to point out one ...

Hiii sudz!! This piece was ok. Of course, you can do better if you try. a Thunderstorm or anything you might be. Do not capitalize the "t". Science explains that ...

Hii luccy! I have read your previous chapter. I enjoyed reading this as the story line seems to be very interesting. Although, it was a bit too brief. You could ...

Hii this isn't goin to be a big review. I don't know what mistakes to point out so I'll just tell you what I though. It was good but not ...

Hi there angel19!! Welcome to YWS...well, I am kinda new here too. Anyways, first of all, always capitalise! "I" on its own should always be capitalised and the beginning of ...

Hii there omsvmars22, I enjoyed reading this chapter.. I haven't read your first chapter, though So I don't know who Leo exactly is, how they know each other and which ...