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Don't bold them, italicized is better or don't quote at all (let the readers notice by themselves) or whatever you prefer. Good storytelling by the way.

the don't stressed out. writing is not about it (except for deadline.)

Simpler vocabularies don't mean simpler descriptions.

I don't mean simplifying by making it dull. It is not what I meant. I don't mean to ask you to reduce the descriptions. What I basically want to say, ...

Ooooohh. You had sliced them apart. Good news. And some of the grammar. I feel the urge to thank you actually. haha. nevermind. How do you improve the first paragraph ...

Yeah, it is a sad story, but it is not the end of it. ;)

I have a little bit disagreement with the tone, but nah, it's good enough to cover that. ;)

Oh wonder~dono, Sup~? XD lol You are welcome. :)

*nods I will be waiting. XD

Thanks sweetie.

Your review helped a lot.

Thanks!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for all the delicious pancake reviews. I am just here to justify why I did 3/5/3/5/5 tanka form instead of 5/7/5/7/7 because this form is originally from Japanese language ...

I just feel like I was singing a song. XD