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Well, I liked the story and it's very exciting. The plot is interesting and I mainly don't care about grammar if I am to read a wonderful story. Then, if ...

Hello there, I guess this story is a quick one. I just hope that there are settings in the story, about the location, the description of the scene. But the ...

Wow, you have written well there. I can totally understand how is it to be alone during those breaks and I liked it when you mention something which I everyday ...

Erm..the story is sweet and I liked the first paragraph though it was simple but it gave a nice introduction. But the next few things are simple and I thought ...

Hello there, your story is nice and full of description about gaming but to me, it's seems too much. Maybe not more actions but turn it into a story as ...

This is a nice story but i have to admit that those in caps, i don't understand what they mean. Perhaps give some explanation when you add them in your ...

Hello there, I have read your story and I thought you are referring to boyfriend and it come out to be a mum. It's nice though and I like it. ...

This is indeed a great story you have here. To be frankly speaking, I didn't read part one so i started on this one. But i'm following nice and i ...