fruityfortissimo

Wow this poem is excellent. I would only make a few changes. The third stanza doesn't seem to flow though. Your use of literary devices are pretty good and your ...

Oh my goodness. This poem is excellent you are an amazing writer! This poem is very similar to something that happened to me last year, and I got around it ...

This is extremely good! I love your wording and how you kept the reader in suspense. Your imagination is absolutely amazing. Creativity is key in this story and I love ...