freezingwreck

You%u2019ve got a lot of nerve pal. You call tribes that yawah ordered to be killed %u201Cevil%u201D and claim the Aztec gods where really Satan, yet expect me to hold ...

I dont think you did your research. I dont even think you have basic reading comprehension. Evolution does not always strive to become more complex. It is way more flexible ...

I updated it flixing a lot of mistakes. I added a name for ya. I fixed up the part about his arm a little. Yes I plan of writing more ...

I believe I fixed everything. I added the commas, fixed the spelling, I made the flash back more clear and the way it goes back to the present too.

No they are the same girl. It starts with the girl and then there is a bit of a flashback thing going on then it goes back to the present.

Thank you for your I updated it and made many fixes. Yes I intended the poem twice in Microsoft Word but YWS made it go to one intend.

"" Hers looks was considered": Should be her look. " I think it should be her looks not her look. Commas are the bane of my existence but Ill do ...

Oh yes I was trying to make a lighthearted story for kids but um it turned out a more dark than that. Not too dark but it lacked humor and ...

Oh and I would like to know why the story is called "Ink" when there doesnt seem to be any ink involved.

I like your poem. I think it needs to be more heavy to get more emotional. When I read it I had james blunt voice in my head as he ...

I copied and pasted the whole thing from google docs and it wasnt bold when i submitted it. And when im in edit mode the bold button seems to be ...