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Re: The Existence of God
The notion that evolution’s goal is to create a "higher being" is a common misconception for people that dont understand evolution. Evolution describes the dynamic of change that occurs in ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The Deep
Interesting Ive never read a story that was a short story but had lyrical syntax. I completely dont understand some of the imagery in the story "on the temples of ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet Lover
I was expecting a romantic love poem but it is mostly about loving sonnets. The way you bring up love and friends at the beginning made me think so but ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Deathscape 2
This story is written in the third person while the first part is written in the first person. Is there a particular reason you changed that? The story still gives ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Deathscape
Well Im a guy and this was the first story Ive read that put be in the perspective as a girl. I was really into it when suddenly I had ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: White Assassin(prologue and chapter 1)
In your story there seems to be a part where is a message in parenthesis right where it says "within reach of his son. (Hannah’s favorite flowers are Rhododendrons.)" This ...
May 17, 2013 -
Re: Ink ~ Chapter One
This story was interesting. It was actiony with a bit of horror elements but was never really scary. You did a good job at making me sucked into the dream. ...
May 17, 2013 -
Re: TOMORROW: Trials of the Lost Swallows Chapter Five
Wochacha! You didnt tell me you were about to post something! It kinda seems a little TWISTED to me tough, ha just kidding. I liked it. It was like WW2 ...
May 17, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1:Leti's life before
Hi there! Quick review for you! Hope it helps Firstly good work, I liked the setting and the descriptions, as it really made me picture what was going on clearly! ...
May 17, 2013
