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  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    The notion that evolution’s goal is to create a "higher being" is a common misconception for people that dont understand evolution. Evolution describes the dynamic of change that occurs in ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Deep

    Interesting Ive never read a story that was a short story but had lyrical syntax. I completely dont understand some of the imagery in the story "on the temples of ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Sonnet Lover

    I was expecting a romantic love poem but it is mostly about loving sonnets. The way you bring up love and friends at the beginning made me think so but ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Deathscape 2

    This story is written in the third person while the first part is written in the first person. Is there a particular reason you changed that? The story still gives ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Deathscape

    Well Im a guy and this was the first story Ive read that put be in the perspective as a girl. I was really into it when suddenly I had ...

    May 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: White Assassin(prologue and chapter 1)

    In your story there seems to be a part where is a message in parenthesis right where it says "within reach of his son. (Hannah’s favorite flowers are Rhododendrons.)" This ...

    May 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Ink ~ Chapter One

    This story was interesting. It was actiony with a bit of horror elements but was never really scary. You did a good job at making me sucked into the dream. ...

    May 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: TOMORROW: Trials of the Lost Swallows Chapter Five

    Wochacha! You didnt tell me you were about to post something! It kinda seems a little TWISTED to me tough, ha just kidding. I liked it. It was like WW2 ...

    May 17, 2013
  • Other » Historical Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter 1:Leti's life before

    Hi there! Quick review for you! Hope it helps Firstly good work, I liked the setting and the descriptions, as it really made me picture what was going on clearly! ...

    May 17, 2013


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— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher