frankmorley

I love this... the poem is deep and imaginative, and the ending is genuinely quite funny, which finishes the whole thing rather well. I have no problem at all with ...

Very enticing title! This poem reminds of the Artic Monkeys song 'why do you only call me when your high' because it seems to follow a similar story. I don't ...

Interesting idea. I like the flow and rhythm of this piece, although I didn't really understand the point/ storyline of it. Why did anonymous live long ago in a land ...

Really interesting satirical piece. I love how I can actually map out any fantasy series, like Lord of the Rings, and see that it fits exactly the story here! Awesome! ...

Yes, I like the similar wording between mind and mine. Also the spacing of the poem is pretty cool. Apart from that your adjectives could be a little more imaginative- ...

I like the idea of this poem, and there's a lot of truth in what you say, but the poem itself isn't of amazing standard. I didn't really like it ...

I understand the intent of this poem, although the execution isn't so good. I think you try to hard to 'tick the boxes' of writing poetry by crafting structured poem ...

The best thing about this story I think was the beginning, "That year, I was infinite". This really pulled me into the storyline as did the rest of the first ...

Hi there, the first thing that I like about this poem is that you present the two protagonists as strangely similar and in tune with each other "we sat there ...