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Hi there! The birthday girl has come to your rescue! My review is as follows. But seriously it is starting to get stupid. Add a comma ^. But seriously, it ...

I agree with Mars. Near the end, it was like the narrator had a case of sour grapes. Like he wanted this lover badly, and by the end, he was ...

Hi there! Interesting how you turned something which so many hate dealing with into something desirable! I personally don't know anybody who has ADHD, but I know plenty who should ...

Wow! I agree; this story could really go far. As cruel as it sounds, I love my revenge, so as I was reading, I couldn't help but imagine myself in ...

Hi! I'm fragile_heart(!), and I'll be reviewing you today! You see its plain while surroundings; it’s plain while walls, I think you mean white. both know that she is bying ...

Hi! I don't think I ever commented your work...I might have, but I don't know. I think I have short term memory loss xD. Anywhozers... The trees whistled as Mitch ...

Hi! I'm fragile_heart(!), and I'm going to review your story today :). The pain was unbelievable. What pain? I thought the M.C didn't go into the fire until after Chase ...

Short and sweet! I think you should add in a little piece about the smell.> I absolutely love the smell of a fresh rainfall. That wet soil and earthworms scent ...

This was really touching. I mean, honestly, there are so many thingsI want to list that I'm going to do point form :) -It was romantic and passionate with the ...

Good job! I agree with Monstar. Other than that, this seems like a pretty interesting story. It's not just the "I was mindlessly strolling along the street when BAMM! I ...

This reminded me of an episode of CSI. It was a really great, unexpected love story. I agree with the posts above me; they took the words from my keyboard. ...

oh my gosh, I almost cried! 1. I love that song. DCFC is amazing.

This is a really good start! I'll admit, your tittle drew me in because right now I am doing a piece on guardian angels called Soulless. I really find it ...

oh my gosh, i like, died a little by laughing. Hmm.... I htink i'm missing a kidney. Oh well :] But you forgot the part about the VOLTURI! You have ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! This was a good poem, but it was very short, so you might not get a lot of critique. "where will we begin?" W should be ...