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Alright, here is my review: 1. I still believe in my dreams No matter what happens to me I think you should say: I (will, or would) still believe in ...

I keep feeling that you have something missing. Your ideas are great but you don't seem to describe them in the best way. I again advise you to enhance your ...

How sincere, only that you have described your own little experience in your own little style, and that does not help many people in relating to your words and images. ...

Ah this is one of the strangest poems I have ever read. But I do admire the way you have described the very little things that amaze a child alot. ...

wooow there's a fight here. Maybe veil has a point, but I believe you should take into consideration that no matter how convinced you are with your poem, the reader's ...

Aww how appreciative and dearly. However: 1.raise money for the less fortunate----> raising, is the verb to be used here. 2.helps me be----> helps you be what? happy perhaps. 3.speak ...

Hihihi it's a little funny topic you know :). However you do have some mistakes: tiered----> tired 2.I wish I was in my bed----> I wish I WERE, that is ...