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Quote: She was too good for guy like him; she was the all American girl. She had blonde hair, blue eyes, nice tits, perfect smile, and most importantly amazing personality. ...

One missed called Frank 4:20 am That should be centered and singled space....not sure how to do that on here.

very cliche at the end. Also I read the poem with out I'm, and it sounded more less rigid. If your going for a repetitive beat keep it, but try ...

"I only first met him when we were twelve, and while I’ve been best friends with him ever" I think the word first is awkward sounding. Also don't tell us ...