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Re: Icy Paths - Prologue
Thanks for the critique! :D I just had a brainwave for this story, and changed the prologue. The beginning paragraphs are the same, though. Is this better? : _______________ Icy ...
Jul 7, 2007 -
Re: Clearwater 4
Darkness is such a good tool, don't you think? Yep. I'm not going to post any more Clearwater, because no one is critiquing any more, but I'm still writing and ...
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: Chronicles of Narnia
I like the Chronicles of Narnia. It's not my favorite series, but I like it a lot! :)
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Cia and Myere - Chapter 1
Thanks for the critique.
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: Cia and Myere - Chapter 1
Done, can you critique it now? I don't mind if you're 100% harsh.
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: Ersinhel - Prologue, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2.
I agree with eleinasari, but otherwise the story was excellent! :D
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
I've read all six books of HP, but only one book of LOTR, so saying HP would be unfair, lol. I agree with the others about HP being easier to ...
Feb 10, 2007 -
Re: Queen of the Harpies
I'm sorry, but I didn't find anything in the prologue or the chapter. It was great!
Feb 9, 2007 -
Re: The Hope of Imagination
I didn't find anything wrong with it...
Feb 8, 2007