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Hey! Sorry for taking so long to get to your review, but, this weekend was insane! XD Anyway, in general, your story has extremely good ideas. However, I do believe ...

Heyhey Poppity!

^^ heyhey Kilo! Nice poem you have going here. I just have a few words of advice. Vast fixed all your little grammar mistakes there, so we're all good with ...

Twinnehhhh!!!

Hihi Jem! (= I really liked this poem. Rain has always been one of my favorite topics for poetry and this is one of the best I've read on the ...

Sorry, I'm late! But, I'm here and ready to critique! (= ^_^ I didn't read the other reviews, so forgive me if I repeat some stuff. The nitpicks have been ...

Aww, Night, that was too cute! :) And, don't worry, I don't hate all cheerleaders! xD Just the evil popular mean ones! And, clearly, you aren't one of those! Now, ...

**giggles** **loves** **runs to find her doppelganger** **comes back to star** **hopes Poppity wins contest** **feels bad for the extremely suck-ish review (more like post) thingie** **worships Poppit

O.o I hate reviewing after Rosey. I mean, talk about covering all the mistakes! :P Anywayz, there are some things that she didn't mention (**le gasp**), which I shall cover ...

Fan #2123217897 3 :P ...................................**is forgetting something**...................................................... Oh yeah!! Gold star! :D

O.o Snoink was just trying to help, y'know...I'm sure that she put quite a lot of effort into that review. She's just trying to help you improve your writing; we're ...

Juniper! I'm here to shred this for you...:P Although I wouldn't be nearly as harsh as Music, I have to disagree with some of your opinions about the pieces. So, ...

O.o Evi, I don't get all...Like Vivi pointed out, there were some mistakes. I really liked the rhythm and flow when I read it out loud. I enjoyed how it ...

^^ I like it, Leth! Since you specified emotion, I'm just gonna go over some quick overall stuff, then rant about emotions, 'kay? :wink: I like the way you revealed ...

Kamas, darling, I love you for writing this poem. Honestly, I hate to crit poems with such a sweet message. But, I'm gonna go to crazy shredding mode with you ...