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Re: Forgetting Names
Hey! Sorry for taking so long to get to your review, but, this weekend was insane! XD Anyway, in general, your story has extremely good ideas. However, I do believe ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Pace - 1
Heyhey Poppity!
May 30, 2011 -
Re: No Name Yet!!!! (needs one real bad!)
^^ heyhey Kilo! Nice poem you have going here. I just have a few words of advice. Vast fixed all your little grammar mistakes there, so we're all good with ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: I Would Sing to You
Twinnehhhh!!!
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Hihi Jem! (= I really liked this poem. Rain has always been one of my favorite topics for poetry and this is one of the best I've read on the ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1 ....of a unnamed story x_x
Sorry, I'm late! But, I'm here and ready to critique! (= ^_^ I didn't read the other reviews, so forgive me if I repeat some stuff. The nitpicks have been ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Cheerleading
Aww, Night, that was too cute! :) And, don't worry, I don't hate all cheerleaders! xD Just the evil popular mean ones! And, clearly, you aren't one of those! Now, ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: Your Doppelgänger and You
**giggles** **loves** **runs to find her doppelganger** **comes back to star** **hopes Poppity wins contest** **feels bad for the extremely suck-ish review (more like post) thingie** **worships Poppit
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Sentient
O.o I hate reviewing after Rosey. I mean, talk about covering all the mistakes! :P Anywayz, there are some things that she didn't mention (**le gasp**), which I shall cover ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Beach Boys Kind of Girl
Fan #2123217897 3 :P ...................................**is forgetting something**...................................................... Oh yeah!! Gold star! :D
May 12, 2009 -
Re: Beast
O.o Snoink was just trying to help, y'know...I'm sure that she put quite a lot of effort into that review. She's just trying to help you improve your writing; we're ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Chessmate
Juniper! I'm here to shred this for you...:P Although I wouldn't be nearly as harsh as Music, I have to disagree with some of your opinions about the pieces. So, ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: The After-Effect of Undercooked Oxygen
O.o Evi, I don't get all...Like Vivi pointed out, there were some mistakes. I really liked the rhythm and flow when I read it out loud. I enjoyed how it ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: The Others Part 1
^^ I like it, Leth! Since you specified emotion, I'm just gonna go over some quick overall stuff, then rant about emotions, 'kay? :wink: I like the way you revealed ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Poem for a Fallen Soldier
Kamas, darling, I love you for writing this poem. Honestly, I hate to crit poems with such a sweet message. But, I'm gonna go to crazy shredding mode with you ...
May 9, 2009