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fireheartedkaratepup

fireheartedkaratepup

  • Growing apart

    Not sure where this came from, or if this is the right category, or if the spoiler thing is for things that give away elements of the piece or just ...

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  • Tribulation

    Haha, I started this in my head on a walk, then quit about where I say Spoiler! : forget this. , In case you couldn't tell. XD It amuses me, ...

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  • Invisible

    *sigh* Yes, a lot of it sounds forced. Now, how do I make it sound natural? XPEdit: So I've decided on the first stanza. The one I'm leaving out is ...

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  • Ghost Child

    Edit: I will rewrite this!! Cha!!In the meantime, reviews are greatly appreciated--they inspire me, make me feel loved, give me things to improve on, and just generally help me write ...

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  • Beautiful Boy

    Spoiler! : The chorus has a different ending line each time--that's why I typed it out (instead of just putting -chorus-).The wording on the ending lines needs work. Rhythm's off.Anyway, ...

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  • A Song

    I wrote this in, like, two minutes. It's very tongue-in-cheek. Hello! How are you? What's your name? I think I know you, Do you think the same? What is this ...

    2 min read


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda