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No, the spelling is right. It's a British thing.

*laughs historically* By the book! I could only read the first year...

"Nine, are you ok?" Sep asked. Ninepaw didn't reply. Why couldn't she breathe?

Ninepaw turned a slow circle. Her head pounded, and her vision swam. "Tiger... Tiger cast..." she choked out. Then she fell alseep.

Games again? No srlsly. Halp.

Credit where it's due, cats! I'm Stori, back at last.

This reminds me of "2001: A Space Odyssey" by Arthur C. Clark. Check it out; there's both a movie and a book.

We decided, without words, to spend the day quietly. Clark cooked breakfast; we talked about life before my accident. "I miss having two good legs," I sighed. "You know I"d ...

Can you post this as the beginning of a storybook? It could be fun.

Oh, "lifesaver" is used as a metaphor. This is actually a revision of the prologue, which can be found in Stori's portfolio.

That was tae kwon do, not karate. I missed this one, but I'm in Climber's class. Good job, Sister.

I would venture to guess that this is a very good piece of writing.

Bravo. I even decided to get coffee a second chance after reading this.

I'm too late to second that, so I'll just give you a gold star.

You'll be happy to know that I've gone back and retold Aiden's story in "Blind;" I'll have it posted in a second.