filmcanister

Im so through Im so done is really nice. when you have really long phrasing, these things stand out more so you dont have to be overly eloquent about them.

i dig it. what's nice about this is that there's an intrinsic rhythm in the lyrics that most songs loose when you cant actually hear the music. i also really ...

He was. More importantly, he had a bat. best lines of the whole piece. right there.

a lot of people already said everything else. except that the repetition was enjoyable. not THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ, but enjoyable.

yes. i think verses would be wonderful.

one of the things that first struck me with this was the notion that you capitalized all of the first line words' beginning letters. classy. the line "and your fingers ...