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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The difference

    I gotta admit, usually I'm not a big poetry fan, but I really like this!! There's a lot of meaning behind these four lines. It's kind of saying that certain ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Perhaps.

    I like the idea of this a lot; pretty much all students can relate. You could afford to vary your sentence length just a tad in some areas, but it's ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Flying High

    I really liked this a lot! You use imagery really well and you set a great tone to the whole story with it. Like the others are saying, I loved ...

    Jun 14, 2014


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