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Thank you for your review - I love knowing what people think of when they read my writing. Honestly, I don't know what I'm talking about either... We just updated ...

Thanks for the adviiiiiiiice... :)

Thank you :) Maybe I'll expand on this sometime. Oooh - Carbon and two oxygen molecules have a love triangle... endless possibilities!

Thanks for the review - I wasn't exactly *trying* to make sense, but probably I'll add on to it - more plot and etc. - maybe this is just a ...

Thank you for the review! I've been thinking of adding to this, actually - most likely I will. Glad you liked it :)

You're welcome :) I'm glad you like it.

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Thanks for being honest :) Maybe I should keep going with it, explain the backstory, etc. I actually wrote a continuation for this at one point which was, if at ...

Your review is very very good - thank you. I'll definitely consider - and make good use of - everything you said.

Thanks for your wonderful review - you made some very good points. I actually can't remember *publishing* this, and it was supposed to still be a draft, and I didn't ...

I'm sure you will :)

Well, try reading your story out loud to yourself: whenever it sounds like there's some sort of pause, shift in idea, etc. just put a division there. I'm sorry if ...

I had trouble with this when I started on here, too! It's quite simple: at the end of a paragraph, type (remove the stars). For a double space, do it ...

Thanks for the review :)

Thank you for your review! I wrote this on a whim in Spanish class - I'm surprised it even makes sense, but I'm really glad you liked it! :)