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Please don't be offended - all I mean is that it would be a lot more interesting if all the really posh schools trained children to be construction workers rather ...

I'm afraid I can't remember exactly how the previous version was punctuated, but I can see you've made a lot of improvements on the grammar - I salute you. Since ...

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Erm, the realised thing: not a mistake, I'm English. Realized is American. Listen and trees aren't supposed to rhyme, the rhyme scheme is ABCBDEFE. Speech falling into silence is a ...

I know this probably doesn't help, but here are my reasons for a couple of the things you've picked up on: first, you're right, but the one predominant characteristic of ...