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i just gotta say wow i want to know how you just got inspiration to write that poem it was just wow so different i liked it its a really ...

i liked where the beginning was going and the middle but at the end you took it into a direction i didn't like but hey its up to you i ...

i really liked it though your last line sorta didn't make too much sense i liked how it sounded all together hope you feel better and that no one else ...

i really liked this poem espeacially how you just string the order of your emotions together i really liked it and i think it shows real emotion which is what ...

wow maybe i don't have to worry about you becoming a gold digger wendy cause you do have some talent for a cuban lol just kidding your poem is really ...

your poem speaks to me it speaks of desire and pain and a deep sorrow it speaks of freedom and captivity its speaks your emotions and i believe that your ...

i liked your poem alot it shows great potential yet i can help but feel you were forcing some of the lines instead of writing from heart my advice is ...

this poem is actually really good it speaks of lots of emotions yet i still feel that its missing something make come alive make it your child your gift to ...