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Re: Dental Awareness
That is a first-rate poem. The writing is outstanding and the ending is hilarious. It just proves that you should be scared when you go to the dentist.
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: A Haiku and Tanka
It is very descriptive and reading it makes me fell relaxed. The first part seems a bit short so I couldn't get into it, but the second part was excellent. ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Monday night
I like the description, it gives you the full picture. It almost feels like I'm there and that is what a good description is supposed to do. I wish there ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: The Watchman
I really like your work. It has a nice rhythm to it and I like the concept. I can relate to it since I follow a similar religion. Keep up ...
Oct 23, 2015
