felistia

I will post the chapter as soon as I can. I am sort of waiting for the review day to be up, so I can post the next two chapters. ...

Thanks for the review. I have been waiting a while for a review. I have applied the changes to the prologue and you are right, it does make a difference. ...

thanks a lot for the review.

Thanks for the review. There was no under lying tone when I wrote it, but I like your ideas for it. I worked a really long time on it. I ...

Thanks.

Good review and I will take it to heart and apply the knowledge to the poem when I have time. I am much better at righting novels. One is in ...

Thank you, all this is very helpful. This was a quick poem for school and everyone found it funny, so I posted it here. I like the review and will ...

Thanks for the review. Those were spelling mistakes and I have fixed them, feeling very embarrassed now. I am very new to poetry so criticism is good and I will ...

Thanks I am new at poetry and didn't know what a haiku was. In saying that if it is supposed to be three lines then you did a really good ...

The part where (an animal hits the doorbell.) I would like to know what the animal was. You could write it (a grey elephant hits the door bell.) Its just ...

The part where (an animal hits the doorbell.) I would like to know what the animal was. You could write it (a grey elephant hits the door bell.) Its just ...

This is a unique piece. I like the way the humour is carried through the whole poem, while still being very emotional. It is slightly depressing, but at the same ...

Brrrrr, this letter gives me chills down my spine. Great writing, it takes a little while to get into it, but once you do, it is extraordinary. I haven't read ...