felistia

Thank you so much for the review. I will fix the problems right away.

ps. I think it has been 17 reviews. wow

Thank you for the review. I guess I am have a hard time putting emotion into the writing. I know what needs to be there, but I am have trouble ...

Clever

Thank you for the review. I am writing a novel with dragons in it called Search for the Ruby of Fire.

That is a much better format.

Thank you for the review.

Thank you, in the first chapter I try to leave a bit of mystery, but everything will be explained farther on.

I own the whole series and am also waiting for the next book Escaping from Peril.

I won't copy any of her really original stuff though like the sand wings, sky wings, mud wings. I also won't copy the original ideas like the night wings having ...

Maybe think of it as a spin off of that story.

I am a big fan of Tui T Sutherland and her amazing books. I am not planning to publish this to make money, just as an idea that I came ...

fixed

Thank you for the review. I will fix it when I have the chance.

Thank you. I am not very good at editing on the whole. It would be great if you could have a look at me Search for the Ruby of Fire ...