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thank you for the review lim

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thank you and it did

I'm glad you liked it.

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It's free verse... they don't have to rhyme or roll off the tongue though they can, in this case I'm going more for meaning than for being pretty. Thank you ...

That's hard to explain, it is at simplist a metaphor for life/love/happiness and the child speaker doesn't want it to go to waste when they pass theyy want their parents ...