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  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Mirror, Mirror

    ahh not a review, i just really loved reading this poem

    Jan 27, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: twenty-three and the years before

    hey, as always, thanks for the review. some of my friends here have also asked me if I have considered publishing and it%u2019s not something I%u2019ve seriously thought about. if ...

    Jan 6, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: twenty-three and the years before

    hey icy, thanks for your review it means a lot. :%u2019)

    Jan 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the first christmas without you

    hey thanks for taking the time to write this review : )

    Jan 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the first christmas without you

    hey there, thanks for your review :) the story is about my dad, but I get what you mean about how I kept it vague. I get how it can ...

    Dec 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the first christmas without you

    hey again, as always, thanks for the review. it means a lot. it%u2019s always cool when the people who read my work both on here and my friends when I ...

    Dec 28, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: how i've been doing

    hi Ellie, as always, thanks for the review. I am glad that one of your favorite parts was the basketball game part. I was trying to make this like the ...

    Dec 25, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: how i've been doing

    hey thanks so much for your comment, it means a lot.

    Dec 14, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the day my dad died

    hey there, thanks for your comment. i thought it was interesting that you say my voice is calm, because i didn't think of it that way until after i read ...

    Nov 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the day my dad died

    hey there, thanks for your comment. i almost didn't post this because i didn't think it was any good. i retried writing it many times to do it justice but ...

    Nov 20, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: to be a woman

    thanks for your review! I definitely felt like I could have expanded this idea a lot more but I felt pretty exhausted after getting this all down. How would you ...

    Oct 24, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: to be a woman

    thanks for your comment

    Oct 23, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: there's something wrong with me

    just realized I can reply to reviews, I%u2019m glad you noticed that this story was a lot tighter, I legit focused on my verbiage based on your review of my ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: the curse of good memory

    thanks so much for this review !!

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: the curse of good memory

    thanks for the review !! Changed the rating :)

    Oct 20, 2023


A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language.
— W.H. Auden