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farq4d

help i've fallen and i can't get up

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    thanks so much for reading this and reviewing it

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    ahh thanks so much for your review ellie, sorry to make you cry LOL

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    Thank you for taking the time to write this review, I really appreciate it. I am really glad you liked the piece. It makes me really happy when people read ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 12 days of poetry (2023 edition)

    review part 2 hehe: "undeserved hope, undeserved glares" this one is tricky for me to interpret also. "all those times you held a blind eye // i wondered if i ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 12 days of poetry (2023 edition)

    LOL love that i said 'quick review' as if i wasn't about to get carried away

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: our favorite colors

    hey there, thanks for taking the time to read this and leave this review : )

    Apr 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: our favorite colors

    hey kate, thanks for taking the time to read my piece and write this review : ).

    Apr 30, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey, thanks so much for taking the time to leave this review. I'm glad you felt like I captured grief accurately. I'm also glad you liked those last two sentences, ...

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey, thank you. i'm glad that my story moved you to treasure the time you have with your loved ones

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: denial through the lens of grief

    hey thanks so much for taking the time to leave this review. I really appreciate it

    Apr 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i visited our childhood home (you weren't in it)

    this makes me sick I love it

    Apr 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey tambo, thanks for the review. I loved that you noticed the connection between those two sentences. I'm glad you could get a sense of the emotion of the piece.

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey there, thanks so much for taking the time to read this and write a review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my piece. i do try to subvert expectations in ...

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos

    hey there, thanks for the review. i'm glad you loved the way the story progressed and how I paced it. i appreciate you!

    Apr 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: there's something wrong with me

    i'm glad i make u feel seen ;-; u make me feel seen too. this is the most unhinged thing i've posted here LOL

    Apr 1, 2024


trust your heart if the seas catch fire (and live by love though the stars walk backward)
— E.E. Cummings