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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: mother's worry

    Unfortunately, I can't say I've ever read a Toni Morrison book :0

    Nov 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: skeletons in the closet

    thanks so much for the review! Yes the character talked about is the dad, so I am glad you were able to see that. I get what you mean about ...

    Aug 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: skeletons in the closet

    Hey there, thanks for the review! To be honest, the story was almost even shorter than this.I nearly ended it at the fifth paragraph, but decided to add a little ...

    Aug 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: skeletons in the closet

    Ahh thanks for the review, I see what youre saying about the shirt part. I reiterated black cotton shirt because it%u2019s not *the* shirt I was looking for, it%u2019s a ...

    Aug 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: birthday wishes

    ahh thanks for the review!!!

    Aug 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: birthday wishes

    thank you for the review Ellie !

    Aug 10, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: birthday wishes

    thank you it means a lot

    Aug 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: draining reflections from a deep sink

    favorite part was guessing who wrote what until i scrolled a little further and saw the key LOL also this quote goes hard: but no one asks if i am ...

    Aug 8, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chores while housesitting

    AHAHAH yes I did write about the pool table before I think in a story from December LOLLLLL

    Jul 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    thank you so much for your kind words : ) I have a lot of other work similar to this too : )

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: chores while housesitting

    Omg! I didn%u2019t even notice the to when I proof read, so thank you. I originally had put %u201Cfall to the dirt%u201D and I decided to change it to %u201Cfall ...

    Jul 24, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: prayers without answer

    ahhh ellie, thanks for the review. it's so interesting to see how you interpreted the poem : ))

    Jul 23, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: prayers without answer

    hi wist, thanks so much for your review, i don't usually write poetry so i'm glad to see you enjoyed reading this one. i'm glad that you were able to ...

    Jul 18, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sometimes you make people sad

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    this is so beautiful. the third stanza is written so well :’)

    Jun 30, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: sometimes you make people sad

    this is so beautiful. the third stanza is written so well :’)

    Jun 30, 2024


It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey