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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: a love too soon

    hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. First of all, I find this short story quite endearing. It's a story about two people in high school who end ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: pieces

    hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really like this poem. I think the length of the poem itself works well with the subject matter. The narrator ...

    Oct 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Scatterbrained

    Hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really love this poem, I think it really captures what it's like to feel uneasy or anxious. I also really ...

    Oct 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Memories of Daddy, pt. 1 & 2

    Hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really love this story. It reads like the narrator is talking to the reader, like a friend sharing their life ...

    Oct 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Catfish for Dinner

    hey there, I'm just here to leave a quick review. I really liked your story. It was really wholesome to read, and it definitely reminded me of going fishing with ...

    Sep 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: dear twelve, i love you -sixteen

    hey, I'm just here to write a quick review. Firstly, I love how we are moving in time with each stanza being a new age for the girl, who ultimately, ...

    Sep 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Neath Juniper's Fern

    Hey there, I'm just here to write a quick review. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I loved that you were able to capture an entire love story just within ...

    Sep 27, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Apocalyptic Events of Fearlessness

    Hi there, I’m here to leave a quick review. Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it. It reads like a good intro for a longer story. One thing ...

    Sep 20, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: A Quiet World

    Hey there, I’m here to give a review. It seems that this is a story that observes something that we see too often; the media covering parts of a story ...

    Sep 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: you will only grow cold if you reminisce of the warmth

    Hey there, here’s a short review. I love how you used onomatopoeias to build the setting around the reader. It helps for us the visualize this moment that the narrator ...

    Sep 19, 2023


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly