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Re: a love too soon
hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. First of all, I find this short story quite endearing. It's a story about two people in high school who end ...
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Re: pieces
hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really like this poem. I think the length of the poem itself works well with the subject matter. The narrator ...
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Re: Scatterbrained
Hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really love this poem, I think it really captures what it's like to feel uneasy or anxious. I also really ...
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Re: Memories of Daddy, pt. 1 & 2
Hey there, I thought I'd leave a quick review. I really love this story. It reads like the narrator is talking to the reader, like a friend sharing their life ...
Oct 3, 2023 -
Re: Catfish for Dinner
hey there, I'm just here to leave a quick review. I really liked your story. It was really wholesome to read, and it definitely reminded me of going fishing with ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: dear twelve, i love you -sixteen
hey, I'm just here to write a quick review. Firstly, I love how we are moving in time with each stanza being a new age for the girl, who ultimately, ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: Neath Juniper's Fern
Hey there, I'm just here to write a quick review. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I loved that you were able to capture an entire love story just within ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: The Apocalyptic Events of Fearlessness
Hi there, I’m here to leave a quick review. Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed reading it. It reads like a good intro for a longer story. One thing ...
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Re: A Quiet World
Hey there, I’m here to give a review. It seems that this is a story that observes something that we see too often; the media covering parts of a story ...
Sep 20, 2023 -
Re: you will only grow cold if you reminisce of the warmth
Hey there, here’s a short review. I love how you used onomatopoeias to build the setting around the reader. It helps for us the visualize this moment that the narrator ...
Sep 19, 2023
