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Re: The murderous suicide
depressing and creepy, but really good. though butterflies FADE; and where did they come from? more details; dont stray from the subjest
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: In love with you.
i loved this poem, but the rhyming scheme was off. some lines flowed and were long while others were short but other than that, great job!
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: A Place Called Freedom
:)
Aug 16, 2008