fallenoutofgrace

Aww Thanks for that I apologize for my miss interpcation. But thank you for clearing that up.

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The first part was suppose to be seen as a shift the first stanza saying how you fall deeper into insanity when you first start. Sorry if that was not ...

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The message behind this poem is a social commentary you could say. I wanted to paint a picture with a hidden meaning that you should let your creativeness out and ...

Thank you and you were correct I was trying to rhyme the ends of time. Thank you for helping me in making my poem a little bit better.

Hey Ossum :3 I really liked this a lot, the repeating of the falling really nailed it for me cause it pretty sums up everything you can feel when your ...