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Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 2)
Thanks for your help love! :) I wanted the guys to be old except for one and I wanted the summer to have that main stream rich girl about her. ...
Sep 19, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)
Thank you for your feedback! Alot of the things you have mentioned I did intentinoally but none the less, thank you. I think of everyone as a lost filled with ...
Sep 7, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 3)
Thanks for your lovely review! By the way, I intentionally made Summmer sound like shes whinning because I want to show that when she dosent get things her way, she ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 3)
Thanks for this review! Your feeback really helps! I intentionally made Summmer sound like shes whinning because I want to show that when she dosent get things her way, she ...
Sep 6, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 3)
Thanks ofr once again reviewming my work! It really means alot! I'm glad it makes you laugh! Summer is very much my alter ego :) I just hope my next ...
Sep 3, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 2)
Thanks so much for your help and encorgament Puck! I'm so glad my humour is hitting the methapohrical bullseye. I've checked my work for grammer and spelling so just tell ...
Aug 30, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 2)
Thank you so much for your help Noelle! Tell me if you spot any more spelling errors! Summer is defitnaly quite the charcter. I really hope my story lives up ...
Aug 30, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 2)
Thank you so much for your feedback on the past two chapters! It REALLY helps. I have no idea how to change the rating! :S
Aug 20, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)
Thanks so much for the help love!
Aug 18, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)
Thanks for all your help! Thanks for the welcome! x
Aug 18, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)
What are you talking about not being good at reviews? This was excellant! Thank you SO much for all the help! I will defitnaly take your advice. Sorry I couldnt ...
Aug 6, 2012 -
Re: Hot Winter (Chapter 1)
Thank you so much for the help! Also, thanks for not being mean about the critism :) I'll get right to work on chapter two! x
Aug 5, 2012
