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Re: Boogie Man
Wow this poem was in fact creepy and a bit depressing . I think that this could have been just a bit more descriptive and use a stricter syntax. But ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: My Princess
I like this poem a lot how descriptive it is and the syntax of it all
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Of Men and mice
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Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Eyes
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Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Draco's first Murder!
I'm also a part of this conversation!
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Parva
I love where you going but to know a hero you must look at the villian. And the villian isn't so clear to me.
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: To Love Her Right....
Hey you join a day earlier than me! Cool!
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Only Then Did I Come to You
This poem hit me with emotion but that emotion was apathy . I think if you use stronger words you can place the burden of your lost friend on your ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Music
Is this the the musings of a fellow band geek ? I play Alto sax. I like your poem and how vague it is. But I fear it is too ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Hera's Curse
This piece seems unfinished I feel there is more to the story but it is not here. The last time I checked Hera was wicked to her husband's mistresses and ...
Sep 1, 2010
