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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Boogie Man

    Wow this poem was in fact creepy and a bit depressing . I think that this could have been just a bit more descriptive and use a stricter syntax. But ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Princess

    I like this poem a lot how descriptive it is and the syntax of it all

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Of Men and mice

    Tag

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Eyes

    Tag

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Draco's first Murder!

    I'm also a part of this conversation!

    Sep 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Parva

    I love where you going but to know a hero you must look at the villian. And the villian isn't so clear to me.

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To Love Her Right....

    Hey you join a day earlier than me! Cool!

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Only Then Did I Come to You

    This poem hit me with emotion but that emotion was apathy . I think if you use stronger words you can place the burden of your lost friend on your ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Music

    Is this the the musings of a fellow band geek ? I play Alto sax. I like your poem and how vague it is. But I fear it is too ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hera's Curse

    This piece seems unfinished I feel there is more to the story but it is not here. The last time I checked Hera was wicked to her husband's mistresses and ...

    Sep 1, 2010


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides