eurobeat_faerie

Oh, okay. You explained the grammar just fine, I understand what to do now. I'm not sure exactly when this takes place, some vague time in Fantasyland from 1650-1700's, but ...

Thanks! I wasn't aware of the pacing issues, but now that you mention it, I was in a bit of a rush while writing the last half. ^^'

By ironing out, I mean make it flow better. Unfortunately, right now I've got a whole lot of homework that my mom is bothering me about, so I won't look ...

This wasn't meant to be a poem that tells a story. It was meant to capture a feeling.

Thanks! I'm bad not to read my stories out loud, too lazy. ^^ I'm sorry to say that a sequel probably isn't forthcoming, but I'll keep that in mind when ...

Just call me Ariel. :smt002 Actually, the poem is a haiku, that's why the flow is a little awkward. I had a devil of a time trying to find a ...