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Re: Mind's Eye
I'm going to give you an honest opinion. It started out as very bland. I have one more day of high school left, then off to college. ‘Course I’m not ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: To Be a Parent
I really liked that! Probably because I can relate to it on a certain level. You described the "fault" feeling perfectly. The points made were clear, giving me a good ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Paul('s Case): Triumph or Tragedy?
Simply wow. That is all I can say. I admit that I had doubted the quality of your essay when I'd looked at the length. But now, that just makes ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Of Mice and Men Persuasive Essay
That was really good. The true strength of an essay lies within structure. Yours was excellent. Your introduction, where you bring up the idea that "We all face death" is ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: United Nations Military Academy -- What's Your Sex?
Oh, wow. That was something I didn't expect. I've never read anything of yours before, so that took me by complete surprise. That was awesome. In a strange, horrible, deranged ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: A poem about a tree.
I thought that was beautiful. Mainly because it was about trees, and most probably because that is exactly what I do. I talk to trees. In a way, this is ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
I know I probably shouldn't comment since I'm part of the contest too, but there is one thing I absolutely MUST say or i'll simply die of not letting you ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: I Will Provide
Hello :3 This is awesome. I love your whole idea. The idea of sacrifice? Perfect. Light touch of gore? Got it. It's well written and easy to read. There is ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Free as a Stallion am I
I liked it. The way you percieve the freedom by comparing it to a stallion is awesome. I also love the repetition you use throughout, especially emphasizing on the word ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
The best book I have ever read would have to be Evergreen , by Belva Plain, hands down. It simply affected the way i saw a lot of things, and ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: The Sorting Hat
I know i probably shouldn't say anything since i'm part of the contest too - but you would knock me out dead in a "Descriptive Hardcore" match any day you ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Rains
Harsh, but incredibly true. When i had first opened your topic, (before Inkwell's contribution) i was instantly confounded by the first two lines of your poem; - And all the ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Caffè
You really made me read it. Saying that, a poem must really entice me - for me to look deeper towards meaning that perhaps the author meant to say; but ...
Jul 23, 2011
