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I'm actually reading this first; and to get a full picture of what everyone's reaction was I read this story and all the comments. Without pointing out specific names I'm ...

So verytime her Cancer would bother her I could hear her scream. I would cover my ears and cry and pray. Now all that praying had gone to waist verytime=everytime ...

Wow. I went to that youtube video; it was amazing. Very professional-looking. I've never had any problems writing in my daily journal; but on my computer... arghh. And everything that ...

I know they always say that critiques that just gush aren't helpful, but wow. That was good. The only thing I would say is to put paragraph one after paragraph ...

I think this was a solid story; but being a hater of twilight I also think your talents could be used on characters and worlds not copyrighted. That said; it ...

Hey Emerald! I really like this story and I'm no good at grammar so I'm just going to say what I thought. MMkay... about the baby. I love the idea ...

Sorry Josh. Joshua. Paul. But I happen to be a good friend of Andrea's and have been hearing about the production of "a comedic short story with an unreliable narrator." ...

Welcome to Yws. There are places in the welcome forum where you can meet people/ tell others about yourself/make writing buddies and whatnot. Just so you know; there is a ...

Hello, I've read this about nine hundred times and I never got around to criquing it. My goodness. First off, one of my pet peeves is average kids having ridiculously ...

Hey, I hate to be a dirty rule-monger, but we do have a 2:1 review-to-post ratio on this website. Not that I'm holding it against you; but just so you ...

Wow, I really really really really really liked it. I think the ending was good-- I don't believe in redemption or regret. They're overrated. I have to admit though-- i ...

Hey! This was pretty good, just a few things you could work on. I WOULD SAY NIX THE ALL CAPS. They're a little distracting and if you say "You!" or ...

You are freaking hilarious. I want to read your collection of essays; i'd pobably spoil myself from the hilarity. Except you don't have a collection of essays. You just have ...

This was amazing, pacu. I really enjoyed it. No grammar mistakes that I noticed; the beginning was really confusing but it made sense at the end, and since the confusion ...

Hello; I read part one but didn't comment on it just yet. Part two is good, though at first I was a little lost. We went to the sight of ...