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Wait, Eragon? I loved that book! Then again, I read it three years ago. (Maybe I should read it again?) Oh, and I used to love Twilight. Enough said. Anyway, ...

Aww. Poor Floppy Ears the sadistic white bunny. :( I quite liked him actually. :D

I have to ask... are you a 30 Seconds To Mars fan? This whole poem made me think of their latest album (especially the last stanza.) I really liked this, ...

What. The f***. I have to admit, I found it the crazy nonsensical babbling quite funny, until it turned into a graphic stabbing scene. Maybe I'm missing the point about ...

Haha! This was cute, and actually quite funny. And sweet. And just the right length. (Today, I'm easily pleased :D Not that this wouldn't please me on another, just... Oh, ...

Can I just say I disagree with almost everyone? This didn't need capitals. It's good how it is. The rhyming of 'lip' and 'dip' does sound forced. Also, I didn't ...

Oh, wow. Wowwowwowwowwowwow... just WOW. I love your style of writing. I loved your original idea. I loved LYLE, I loved Margaret, I loved RAY. I don't think it needs ...

I loved the idea. Didn't love much else about it though. :( Stop misusing commas! There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage, his name was Darkness, ...

This was kinda... Short. That's one word for it. If you're not planning to develop this into a novel or something (that's what I thought it was at first), make ...

Wow. Just... Wow. Amazing idea, by the way. I agree with Snoink, build up lots of suspense THEN bring in the dragon. And add more description. And this annoyed me ...

I read the other version, and I definitely like this one better. It has more description, and a lot more emotion. Hopefully in the rest of the story we'll learn ...

I hate to be a nitpicker, but please fix the spelling and grammar. I found it almost impossible to read. It sounds like you have a good idea, but there's ...

It's writing like this that make me want a dog. I think you got all the emotions down perfectly. Usually I don't like the whole anthropomorphism angle, but this was ...

I didn't really understand either version. At first it seemed to be about rock-hopping in the river - a metaphor for innocence, if you know what I mean. but then ...

if they knew what was happening in our heads they would know life was a tacky burlesque, glitzy and oversexed, designed to keep the shy from singing. I loved this ...