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I'm not a poet, so I won't comment on your writing style/topic. But it was definitely effective (I need a new word, 'effective' starts sounding bland when you use it ...

My first reaction was "Neeegaaarrrrgh!" I know that doesn't make any sense-it's the sound I make when emerging from a absorbing yet shocking story. "Neeegaaarrrrgh!" is probably the best compliment ...

I think 'An Awkward Moment' wasn't the right name for that piece. I liked the idea of conquering the whole world and then going, "WTF do I do now?" but ...

I read about three replies to this before my ribs (and my brain) started hurting. I love you crazy Americans and how you hate everybody :) The most annoying thing ...

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww. This was... good. Reallyreally good. (I need to work on my description....) Anyhoo, the first few sentences seemed more tell-y than show-y. And I don't think he'd have stuff ...

I'm trying to tell you how much I loved this without using the words 'loved', 'really liked', 'brilliant' or amazing'. And failing miserably, but you get my point. Anyhow. It's ...

Overall, I liked it. Really good idea and written well. And it was interesting (the good interesting :))Here's some things I think you could improve on: It was lying on ...

Haha... I wish I could feel sorry for you, but I can't, because as you head into winter we head into summer... Anyway, this was very clever. It summed up ...

Umm... What the fuck?! What the fuck. What. The. Fuck! So, you took crappy science fiction, James Bond, trashy romance, teenage drama and a pinch of rape, beat it all ...

Nyaaaaaahhhh! (Not sure what that was. Forgive me. The five mochachinos, probably I think.) Anyway. I haven't been on for a while, and I randomly decided to drop in and ...

Nawwww! Maybe I shouldn't be up this late. Maybe I shouldn't have drunk all those home-made mochachinos (emphasis on the chocolate.) Because all I want to do is search the ...

This was so beautiful. I loved how you repeated the beginning paragraphs at the end, I loved the image of the raindrop: an entire lifetime spent solely to fall and ...

I'm kinda confused. So, at the end did you change to the murderer's point of view? Or was it his point of view the whole time-he was defending himself? I ...

Haha! At first, I thought this was going to be stupid, but then I read Once again, Voldemort has been defeated by strategic placement of a deadly monologue and pissed ...

The obvious one: Harry Potter. All of them. There was no way books those thick were going to make good movies. I suppose I like the movies, but the differences ...