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Re: Raining Eyes
I actually really love this poem. I can relate with it, and it makes me think. The analogy "Raining eyes" is really great, it's a little different and new than ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Lies
I like this! It's really good for a first try, way better than i could do(: There were some parts where the meter kind of changes a little in the ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
I really like this, Especially the details in the first stanza. The feeling is a little lost from the beginning, But sort of brought back at the end. I like ...
Apr 26, 2010
