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Reread it! I finally got around to editing it!

I liked this poem. I think what Tassen Spellbinder just said would be a smart idea. Great poem!

thanks everyone. You all helped me soo much. I will try to fix up the nitpicks.thanks!

As I pm-ed Peanutgallery007, these are called American haiku's. They do not follow that 5 7 5 rule. That is a Japanese haiku. An American haiku has less than sixteen ...

Thanks for all the help guys! I will start to fix it up as soon as i am free. That will not be for a while. I have so much ...

I like this a lot. It was intense and dark, in a way. Same things as Saphirra and The One Who is Awesome said, though. Space out your paragraphs and ...

Thanks everyone! I want to ask you, can I use some of the sentances you gave me? They're good. I was not sure if you guys would call that stealing ...

Thanks for all the feedback. I can not figure out what to write for that last line. My problem is that I need it to rhyme with the word cold. ...

I did not realize this was such a powerful poem. Thanks for telling me! I did try to include emotion, though.

Nice. It is sweet. Consider adding more. It would sound more cute. You could call it "I Will Remember You"

Thanks for the help and advice! I worked on this poem for a while. Glad you liked it. I have another poem called "Look at the Children". It is posted ...

Thanks for the help. My dad says the same thing about the fragments. I'll work on it.

It did not actually happen to me. Thanks for reading it.

That did help thanks. I dont know how to post things in the community or disscusion forums. Can you help me?

i loved that! it is a really good poem. i doubt mine are that good.