emilooguinness

what a beautiful heartful story, i love the gore and sadness in it, i love the way he done it for her. someguys dont do alot for there girls, but ...

it was amasing,and almost sad

hahah it was a verry sly ending, if you dontmind me saying, the first part,ifyou carryed it on, it could have been a beautiful and sad poem full of heart, ...

i love the emoness of this, its a beautiful poem, full of thought and putts in alott of pain, showing feeling and i love it :) id love to know ...

i quite liked this, verry well written, dicriptive his feelings and her expresions beautiful. when wrighting romance, i find it hard to keep the story going, without adding sadness ora ...

im loveing this, so true and so bloody down to earth. its not the usual poem of love, sorrow and adventure but gives an unusual twist to a wrighters work. ...

this is a beautiful poem, written from a writter who ovously shows heart and perticulary emotion in there wrighting. they show the world, as not the happy place, a childs ...