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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Recent Future

    You're welcome

    May 28, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Horrible Day

    thank you for you review ill take note of your corrections

    Dec 14, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Horrible Day

    thank you for your review

    Dec 14, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Dear Self - 11/27/2018 - Flash Memoir

    I was talking about th tenses, i dont quite understand how they were put

    Dec 14, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Road To A Safer Future

    1,500 words

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Dear Self - 11/27/2018 - Flash Memoir

    Hey Nice work here. But i just dont quite follow the tenses in the paragraps below but all in all its a n ice memoir When you are four, Mom ...

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Forest

    Heyyy Yasmindaiha This is a good story. The suspense is very good. Im really eager to know what happens next. But the events are too sudden from the beginning,. You ...

    Dec 13, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Horrible Day

    thank you so much

    Apr 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Road To A Safer Future

    thank you so much, i appreciate it

    Apr 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Road To A Safer Future

    Thank you very much for your suggestions, well noted and appreciated. Accra is the capital city of Ghana in West Africa. And i write this for a a competition so ...

    Apr 9, 2018


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